Sunday 30 September 2012

ASSIGNMENT - DRAFT1 (Wk10)


Submission Materials

Submission Field :
Logline
A wife from 800 years century came to 21 centuries to find out who is the one who murdered her husband.
Key character motive
The key character motive is to do the investigation and find who is the murderer.

3act structure
3 ACT STRUCTURE (= story map on ONE page)
ACT1 – SET UP
Key Character
The Wife
Motive – Key Character MUST DO/WANT/NEED something or else…
The key character motive is to do the investigation and find who is the murderer.
Situation
In 800 years ago, A wife was thought that her husband being kill by a mystery person. It was being thrown into the lake. She was so depressing and wanted to find who is the one who murder her husband.
Other important information
The wife was not married to the right man that truly love her.
Turning Point1
Along the way she finally got some clue of the murderer.

ACT2 - CONFRONTATION
Conflict / Obstacles - Key character struggles to achieve motive
When she was doing futher investigation. She is running away from a group of people that wanted to kill her. Along the way she went through a mystery wall. With not noticing She actually went to the 21 centuries.
 Turning Point2
She got a chance to meet her husband in 21 centuries.
ACT3 - RESOLUTION
Climax
The murderer scene in 800 years centuries was been repeated similarly on the 21 centuries.
Up the Stakes
It start to play back the incident in 800years centuries. The husband wanted all her assets by planning to kill the wife. But the man that really love her sacrifice his life to save her.
Outcome
The person that died in the lake was not her husband during 800 years centuries. The person who died is actually her true love.
Resolution – key character’s motive achieved?
She finally got back to the 800 years centuries and send her husband to jail.

Key Message - and the moral of the story is…
Do not conclude just by seeing things in front of your eye. As some time the things you seen is not really the truth.
Student Name: Chua Qiu MinClass: 2D / Student No: F11DM1089

Sunday 2 September 2012

EXERCISE 1 – CHARACTER STUDY


Name: Chua Qiu Min
Student Number: F11DM1089
EXERCISE 1 – CHARACTER STUDY

Deadline: Week 7

Blog Address/Link: http://krisstoryscript.blogspot.sg

The Brief: INDIVIDUAL: 2 KEY CHARACTERS
Each individual student is to read the above storybooks and do a character study on 2 key characters.
The 2 key characters are:
- Mr Twit or Mrs Twit
- The Little Prince
1.1- Write a 1 sentence summary for the story “The Twits” & “The Little Prince”.
1.2- Do a character bio for the 2 key characters in point form. You can even feature a mind map or a visual sketch representation of the key characters to support your notes.
1.3- Then, write about 500 words, double spaced, telling me how we can easily identify them as key characters in the story and why are these characters so crucial to the story. Is the author successful using these characters to tell his story? Support your answer with reasons why you think the author is successful or not successful. Each character write up should be about 500 words and should only contain your ideas and analysis of the character. (use your own words to express YOUR thoughts on the characters)
Please note that you should NOT use other references in your analysis from an external source.

Grading:




The Twit

1 sentence summary:
A husband with a hairy beard has a bad habit and a wife having terrifying belief and ended up as an unattractive old hag which made her grew uglier day by day passed.

Key Character:
The wife is a Twit Evil woman who used a walking stick to hit dogs and children. 
The husband is being dirty, using his beard wipes off the stains  with the back of his hand or on his sleeves. He never gets hungry. He is a wicked man who always plays trick and kill the animal. He trick his wife to get back at her. Wicked woman who plays tricks on her husband to get back at him. 

500 words: “The Twits”

Mr and Mrs twit are easily recognized as the key character in the story as the story always tell 
us how they pranks others and their evil heart.

Mr and Mrs twit are crucial to the story as they are two evil married couple that does those 
wicked things to the animal and how the poor animal get revenge after being badly tortured 
by the evil couple.

The author is successful in telling the story with this two character as he tell us how evil of 
them torture those animal and their tricks. It had a wonderful ending and make us 
remembered how the evil couple got their punishment.
One of the part that I can remember are Mr twit is evil and sickening as he had long and thick 
beard stuck with the leftover food, sauce and gravy and the trick that he plays on his wife. 
Mrs twit, were sickening as she had a walking stick not because she couldn't walk properly 
but because she wanted to use it for hitting children and dogs. 

Another part that reminds me how evil the twits are as they wants to have bird pie every week. 
The process of having it were evil. They put glue on a tree and wait for birds to sit on the tree 
and when the birds died of hunger as they were trapped, the twits will bake them into pies.
They also prank the monkey cruelly as they forced the monkey upside down for long hours 
just to enjoying how the monkey got suffer. This shows the wicked side of human that might 
be in real world.

The author had made the story being successfully as he is creative of telling as the process 
pranks and the evil heart of the character, that allows the readers to dislike the behaviour of 
the character. The part the animal took their revenge were interesting. They treat them as bad 
as bad as what the evil couple does to them. This allows the animal the gain back their 
freedom and their peaceful life in the end which make us feel delightful.


The Little Prince
1 sentence summary:
The author bring the little prince to seven planets apart from his own.

Key Character:
The Little Prince is a mystical and loveable person. He is the only resident of a small planet, which the narrator refers to as B-612. The Prince leaves his planet to visit other places and finally lands on Earth. In the Sahara Desert, he meets the narrator and befriends with him. The narrator tells the prince that he encounter those things which  relates the adventures of the Prince on the other planets he visit.

500 words: “The Little Prince”

As the main characters always appeal in every part of the story. This can easily identify them 
as key characters in the story. 

From the part of the prince wants the author to draw a sheep and it turn out in other picture in 
the and the author draw a box and told him that the sheep was kept inside the box and then 
the prince accepted the painting which made the author puzzled. This tell us that the prince 
has a unusual view then normal working adults.

Another reason would be when the part that the prince when the planet of  the Lamplighter 
The lamplighter lives on asteroid 329 and does the job of lighting and then putting out the 
lamplight. The lamplighter thinks that his is a terrible profession, because once every minute 
he has to light the lamp, for his planet makes a complete turn every sixty seconds. The Prince 
feels that the lamplighter is the only one who could have been his friend.
Than the prince when to another and the rest if other planets. This are the evidently that tell 
us the prince is the key character. 

The reason of these characters are so crucial to the story as he is the only one who will tell as 
how in landed to earth and meet the narrator to befriend, from then he lead us to the 
adventure to the other seven planets. 

It is a successful story that the author used these characters to tell his story as tell us how this 
society were lead people to have a difference mind set and it is unusual to think like the 
prince as he had a different thoughts from us towards this society. The author of this book 
brought out unusual understanding in the society through the little prince.




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lecturer : eannette teo
email: syteo@nafa.edu.sg




Sunday 26 August 2012

1 Sentence Summary: Story 2 – based on an item



(p2 - Cover Page, typed 12pts to 14pts, double spaced)

Name: Chua Qiu Min
Student Number: F11DM1089
Exercise 2: Telling My Story

Deadline: Week 6

Blog Address/Link: http://krisstoryscript.blogspot.sg

The Brief: – Write NEW stories for the next 2 weeks. Each story MUST have a TITLE and a 1-SENTENCE SUMMARY of what your story is about. The 1-sentence summary should entice the reader to read the story. Refer to class/lecture notes for more information.



Week 6 – Story 2 – based on an item 

Title:
1 Sentence Summary:




It all begin with china tang dynasty in 500 years ago, where a prince uses a pair of golden 
bracelet to escape from the enemy by swapping bodies with another soldier. When 
someone wears one of the bracelet, their bodies magically trade places while their memory 
remain where they were.

Tom is very well known in his work place as he get along very well with his colleagues. Not 
long ago he just promoted to manager, and Ken is one of his best friend. It was Ken
 birthday so he decided to buy something  for him. He went through a lot of shop and still 
couldn't find what to give to his best friend. So he stop searching and take a rest. On the 
way back home he pass by a shop which might able to get his friend a gifts. The shop that 
sell lots of tang dynasty antiques. Tom saw a pair of golden unique bracelet and decided to 
buy it for Ken another piece for himself.

One night  Tom's house got intrude by burglars. They steal his one of the bracelet .The 
burglars is a lady called Jane who loves bracelet. Therefore instead she sold it away she 
decided to wear it.

The next morning when they wake up, They found out that each of them is trapped in the 
other's body. This is especially difficult for Tom, who has a wedding dinner coming up soon.

After Tom convinces his friends of who he is, they help him  investigate the body swap. They 
search through internet and finds a picture of the bracelet . When they went to the tang 
dynasty antiques shop to know more about it , the shopkeeper explains how the bracelet 
work and tells them that they must find the other bracelet soon or the change will become
  forever.

Meanwhile, Tom is hired for two jobs while secretly living at his own home, where he works 
as a maids, his parents tell him about their marital problems and he helps them rekindle 
their sex life. At office, while cleaning the girls toilet, he spies on his girlfriend Wendy, who 
truly loves him as before he was suspecting that she has another boyfriend. 

During this time, Jane  has been using Tom 's body to make money from men. One of his 
friend sees a picture of Jane robbing a girl on the  news paper and goes to the scene of the 
crime. After finding a business card from a pub where Jane works as a man who dance to 
those 60's year old rich old lady, He  informs Tom,  and they went to the pub. When they 
find Jane steals his bracelet and puts it on himself along with the other one. With the two 
bracelet now on the same person, Tom and Jane bodies return to their original owners. 
After Tom makes up with Wendy.  Jane, running from the police.

Done by: Chua Qiu Min




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lecturer : eannette teo
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